Wreak-it Ralph P.O.V story feedback

look I may not be the best P.O.V story teller out there but I would appreciate it if I could at least have some feedback on my new P.O.V story based off the movie Wreak it Ralph (my story takes place in the game's Fix it Felix and Sugar Rush. The Arcade is closed (but not for good) its closed for a major upgrade project that will take four to five years. giving all the arcade game characters some unwinding time and much needed rest.) the inspiration to make this P.O.V came from this  riotrebel.deviantart.com/art/R… I couldn't read this Deviants story on older Vanellope and Ralph cause the link took me to fanfunction.net but I could read the story cause it wasn't there any more (I would have liked to read it but I couldn't do so) so I hope the Deviant who originally made up the fan made child of Vanellope and Ralph would mind if I used Reggie in this story I'm writing  (and here is the link to my story totaldramamoivemix.deviantart.…)